Did you get a little drunk
From the rum soaked sun,
The tequila clouds,
And wispy mountains?
Drinking from the fountain
Overflowing with wines
Red, white, and pink
Such spirit and zest you possessed
Had you drank a little too much?
The weight seems to be hanging over
Your head,
And my voice
Never quite seemed to hurt you
Before
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Nice, love the metaphor of getting drunk off of scenery.
ReplyDeleteOne thing, the "seem".. should it be seemed?